Post by Master Shiru on Jul 12, 2017 13:29:19 GMT 10
Not a requirement but I must ask if Pikle fits in with the Namekian naming conventions? Is Pikle related to instruments or slugs/snails in any way?
Namekians all live in the Porunga Rocks region of Earth. Namek was destroyed long ago; So Pikle wouldn't be on Namek or have anything to do with it.
Please use an actual appearance description and personality description.
Some of your descriptions don't match up with your skill levels. Your strength description would be E Rank; 90 kg is feasibly liftable by an ordinary human but D Rank is start of series Goku/Krillin. Please rectify this.
Also, please adjust the formatting of your application; as many things that are not meant to be bolded are in bold.
Pikle was born second and the last of the guru, while his older brother was a good fighter physically pikle was a master with ki. So he was chosen to be the heir of his family, his father pushed him to his limits with training always shooting that extra hi blast agility training. It made pikle strong. When his father's time came the title of guru was passed on pikle and the knowledge of many before him. His brother traveled to earth and pikle stood gaurd to namek. Pikle trains many people pushing them like his father did to him, but the amazing results made his training famous.
Namekians all live in the Porunga Rocks region of Earth. Namek was destroyed long ago; So Pikle wouldn't be on Namek or have anything to do with it.
Please use an actual appearance description and personality description.
STRENGTH:
SKILL RANK:C E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle has a small not of strength and an barely lift a 90 pound weight
Racial:Great namek
SKILL RANK:D E_A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle inherited his father's ability to grow to great size and great strength at the loss of agility for a short amount of time
SPEED:
SKILL RANK:D E_A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle is very fast due to his small size
ENDURANCE:
SKILL RANK:E E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:Due to his small size he can't endure much of a beating
ENERGY:
SKILL RANK:D E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle is gifted with ki and was trained with it since birth
INTELLIGENCE:
SKILL RANK:D E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle is pretty smart because he would study in his free time
SKILL RANK:C E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle has a small not of strength and an barely lift a 90 pound weight
Racial:Great namek
SKILL RANK:D E_A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle inherited his father's ability to grow to great size and great strength at the loss of agility for a short amount of time
SPEED:
SKILL RANK:D E_A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle is very fast due to his small size
ENDURANCE:
SKILL RANK:E E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:Due to his small size he can't endure much of a beating
ENERGY:
SKILL RANK:D E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle is gifted with ki and was trained with it since birth
INTELLIGENCE:
SKILL RANK:D E-A
SKILL LEVEL DESCRIPTION:pikle is pretty smart because he would study in his free time
Some of your descriptions don't match up with your skill levels. Your strength description would be E Rank; 90 kg is feasibly liftable by an ordinary human but D Rank is start of series Goku/Krillin. Please rectify this.
Also, please adjust the formatting of your application; as many things that are not meant to be bolded are in bold.
